Give Me The Night
Under a microscope our bodies are watched by a full moon that winks it's eye.
Intertwined by waves of energy and defined by light years to come.
Hold on to the darkness as it whisks us away.
Give me the night at the dawn of the day.
TJAZZT
I left you a comment about the poem the other day - did you get it? I was wondering if you could tell us a little bit about this poem, what it means to you and why you wrote it. Rebecca
ReplyDeleteHey Rebecca, I didn't get your comment. To answer your question, this piece like many of the things I write are just parts of a puzzle that will eventually come together for the reader. My blog is the beginning of a journey meant to inspire through twist and turns and ups, and downs of life through the eyes of an artist.
ReplyDeleteI suggest offering a bit of lead with your ideas - letting your reader find her or his need is fine but you also need to take the lead and help guide him or her as to your intention for them. offer an introduction to the information you are providing - say why you chose it and who wrote it - if it is you, great - take ownership!
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